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rosemary edghill: Met by Moonlight synopsis
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Met by Moonlight: Synopsis

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SETTING:  Puritan England in 1647, during the height of theഀ਀English Civil War.

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HEROINE:  Diana Crossways is a modern 20th century woman, aഀ਀specialist in restoring antique books.  Diana is tall, blond,ഀ਀blue-eyed, and looks very wholesome in a Cybill Shepard/Christieഀ਀Brinkley sort of way.

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HERO:  Upright-Before-The-Lord Makepeace (later revealed to beഀ਀Shadow of the Shining Ones) is a 17th century witch-hunter,ഀ਀assistant to Matthew Hopkins.  Upright has dark eyes and longഀ਀black hair: think Daniel Day-Lewis from Last of the Mohicans orഀ਀Antonio Banderas from Interview With The Vampire.

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It's Halloween, and Diana Crossways is more interested inഀ਀getting to her coven meeting than in staying late to close upഀ਀Witch Hunt, her Salem, Massachusetts occult bookstore.  Besides,ഀ਀there's a big thunderstorm brewing, and she'd like to get to theഀ਀covenstead before it breaks.  Unfortunately, a special messengerഀ਀has just delivered a rare book for restoration, and Diana wantsഀ਀to get it unpacked and take a quick look at it before leaving. ഀ਀She discovers the book is an ancient handwritten volume, nearlyഀ਀falling apart, but just as she begins to look at it, there is aഀ਀violent crack of thunder and all the lights in the store go out.

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The storm gets worse and Diana is driven from the workroomഀ਀clutching the book only to find herself outdoors on a starlitഀ਀summer night in a strange wooded landscape.  Twentieth-Centuryഀ਀Salem has vanished.

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Stumbling through the woods, growing more and more worriedഀ਀by the moment, Diana finally panics completely when she runs intoഀ਀a grim, pale man, dressed entirely in black, who glares at herഀ਀mutely: Upright-Before-The-Lord.  She feels an attraction to himഀ਀stronger than any she has ever known, but flees in blind panic asഀ਀he uses his elven magic on her to drive her away from him for herഀ਀own safety.

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When she stops running, Diana finds herself in a forestഀ਀glade with a small fire in the center, where twelve women inഀ਀Puritan dress surround a man in a horned stag mask.  Diana hasഀ਀found the local witches' coven.

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The pentacle around her neck -- which the witches call theഀ਀goosefoot cross -- marks Diana as one of their own, as does theഀ਀book she is carrying.  Diana did not have time to look at itഀ਀before, but now sees that it is a Book of Shadows, a witch'sഀ਀spellbook.  But what is of more interest to her at the moment isഀ਀the fact that everyone here at the coven meeting believes thatഀ਀this is the 17th century, and that simply by coming here toഀ਀worship they are putting their lives in danger.  Exhausted,ഀ਀terrified, and fuddled by the drink that they give her, Dianaഀ਀falls asleep on a pile of cloaks and dreams of the burning-eyedഀ਀stranger in the woods.

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A member of the coven, Mistress Abigail Fortune, awakensഀ਀Diana the next morning and brings her back with her to theഀ਀coastal village of Talitho at the edge of the New Forest inഀ਀Hampshire, England.  Though Mistress Fortune believes Diana to beഀ਀a Shining One from the Hollow Hills, she will pass Diana off asഀ਀her niece from London, Mistress Anne Mallow.

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Over the next month Diana begins slowly to adjust to theഀ਀situation, but just before the next full moon (July) theഀ਀terrifying news comes that The Witchfinder General of England,ഀ਀Matthew Hopkins, is to visit Talitho.  When Hopkins gets to theഀ਀village, Diana receives a second shock: one of Hopkins'ഀ਀assistants, Upright Makepeace, is the man she fled from in theഀ਀forest on the first night she arrived. 

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Though Diana hoped that the power that drew her here wouldഀ਀send her home again once the moon is full once more, the onlyഀ਀thing she meets in the woods that night is Upright-Before-The-ഀ਀Lord, with whom she shares some pulse-pounding kisses.  Thoughഀ਀she is enormously drawn to him, Diana believes that Upright-ഀ਀Before-The-Lord is either crazy, simpleminded, a murderer, or allഀ਀three: Diana hates herself for obsessing on him.

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From the moment he saw Diana, Upright knew that there was aഀ਀magical bond between them.  He is fighting this bond with aഀ਀desperate intensity, knowing that it means Diana is a Witch andഀ਀that Hopkins will kill her if he finds out.  Upright's greatestഀ਀fear is that he may somehow betray Diana into Hopkins' clutchesഀ਀himself, and so, though he desperately longs to possess her, heഀ਀attempts to treat her with brutal indifference. 

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As soon as Diana discovers who and what Upright Makepeaceഀ਀is, she realizes she should loathe him and all he stands for. ഀ਀But she doesn't find it easy, or even possible.  Diana isഀ਀compulsively drawn to Upright, and wonders at the aura of sorrowഀ਀he seems to carry with him.  After their first encounter in theഀ਀village, they continue to meet, at first by accident but then onഀ਀purpose, drawn together by a power each of them is helpless toഀ਀withstand.

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Hopkins begins to draw his web of persecution about theഀ਀little village.  Diana tries to tell the coven that Hopkins is aഀ਀fraud, who does not believe in witches or possess a Writ fromഀ਀Parliament legitimizing his actions, but all she accomplishes isഀ਀to get the Magister of the coven -- who is also the local pastor,ഀ਀Edmund Conyngham -- to call a Grand Coven for Lammas (August 1),ഀ਀to work magic against Hopkins.  A Grand Coven is a meeting of allഀ਀the covens in a 50-mile radius.

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As the date approaches, Diana realizes that she herself isഀ਀the greatest danger to Mistress Fortune, and decides that for theഀ਀good of all she must leave.  On the secluded hillside above theഀ਀churchyard she meets Upright once more, and surrenders to theഀ਀desire she feels for him.  During their tryst, Diana catches aഀ਀glimpse of the magnificent man he truly is -- and begins toഀ਀realize that Upright-Before-The-Lord is something more thanഀ਀human.

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Upright wishes Diana to leave with him -- he has found theഀ਀strength through his love for her to escape Matthew Hopkins.  Heഀ਀tells her that Hopkins knows about the coven's meeting tonightഀ਀and plans to arrest them.  Diana, thinking that Upright hasഀ਀betrayed the coven to Hopkins, runs to warn them, but is tooഀ਀late, and is captured as well.

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Upright returns to Hopkins, hoping Hopkins will not guessഀ਀the depth of his rebellion and that he will have a chance to freeഀ਀Diana.  But Hopkins already knows, and when Upright returns toഀ਀him, Hopkins and his other assistant, John Sterne, seal Uprightഀ਀(who is violently claustrophobic) into a coffin, telling him thatഀ਀he is to be buried alive.

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The next time Diana sees Upright -- in Hopkins' office atഀ਀Christchurch Gaol, the man she loved has vanished, and Uprightഀ਀has become a ranting witch-hunter, whom Hopkins charges withഀ਀obtaining Diana's confession.  Over the next several weeks, Dianaഀ਀comes to realize that Upright has been programmed, and that sheഀ਀must do all she can to break it.

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One night Upright, tormented beyond endurance both byഀ਀Hopkins and by his own awakened feelings for Diana, drags Dianaഀ਀down to the Long Chamber where suspects are tortured, determinedഀ਀to have her confession by any means.  What begins as intendedഀ਀rape turns into mutual seduction, and in Diana's arms Uprightഀ਀Makepeace vanishes, and Shadow of the Shining Ones recovers hisഀ਀memory, his soul -- and his elvish power. 

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But before he can act on this new knowledge, Hopkinsഀ਀denounces Shadow as a witch and he, too, is imprisoned.

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Finally Diana and Shadow -- or Upright Makepeace -- areഀ਀brought to trial, the first of Hopkins' victims to be tried.  Sheഀ਀denounces Hopkins, and discovers that her patient subversion hasഀ਀borne fruit: several weeks before, Pastor Conyngham sent toഀ਀London for help, and no Judge Daniel Merriam arrives with aഀ਀warrant for Hopkins' arrest.  In the ensuing riot, Diana andഀ਀Shadow escape.

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Diana and Shadow are led to safety by the shimmering visionഀ਀of a mystic white stag which leads them to a cave deep in theഀ਀woods where they consummate their love in freedom for the firstഀ਀time.  For the next month, Shadow and Diana hide in the woods,ഀ਀living a primitive yet oddly pleasant life.  Shadow revertsഀ਀totally to his elvish heritage, painting his body in camouflageഀ਀colors and looking exactly like what he is -- a Shining One fromഀ਀the Hollow Hills.

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On Halloween Eve, 1647, while bathing in a forest pool,ഀ਀Diana and Shadow are discovered by Mistress Fortune, whom Dianaഀ਀thought was dead.  She tells them that Hopkins was proven a witchഀ਀with his own lying instruments and put to death.

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Suddenly Diana realizes that she has the opportunity to goഀ਀home as well, and asks Mistress Fortune if the coven will work toഀ਀send her home.  Mistress Fortune agrees.

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Shadow is hurt and baffled by this decision, since heഀ਀recognizes Diana as his righ-malkin; his bonded mate.  The moreഀ਀Diana tries to explain why it's a good thing for her to go, theഀ਀more she realizes that she wants to return to her own time mostlyഀ਀out of habit -- and the fear that if she stays, she willഀ਀disappoint or hurt Shadow in some way even worse than thisഀ਀rejection of him.

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But when Diana stands within the coven's circle of power,ഀ਀she realizes that love with all its painful uncertainty is betterഀ਀than safety, and breaks free from the circle to find Shadow, andഀ਀journey with him back to his ancestral Hills in Ireland.

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HISTORICAL BACKGROUND (See also historical note at end ofഀ਀manuscript): 

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The English Civil War served as a backdrop to an even bloodier episode in human history: the witch hunts in which thousands died for no crime greater than being different.  Whole villages were exterminated as the web of accusations spread.

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Matthew Hopkins, self-styled "Witchfinder General of Allഀ਀England" was a real person, a sleazy con-man who could be hiredഀ਀to seek out and destroy witches.  Hopkins was in his earlyഀ਀twenties when he began his career, and apparently did not believeഀ਀in witchcraft himself, but he was cunning enough to falsify hisഀ਀results with a set of cleverly designed tools that could proveഀ਀anyone to be a witch.  From the confiscated property of hisഀ਀victims, Hopkins soon became one of the richest men in England (aഀ਀sort of Puritan Yuppie: Young, Upwardly-mobile Persecutor), butഀ਀in 1647, Hopkins vanishes from history.  The events in Met byഀ਀Moonlight are set just after Hopkins vanishes from the historicalഀ਀stage and present a reasonable coda to his career, incorporatingഀ਀one of the most persistent legends of its end: that Hopkins wasഀ਀accused of witchcraft himself and died as a direct result.

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The form of witchcraft (Wicca) practiced by the villagers inഀ਀Met by Moonlight is a reconstruction of a possible survivingഀ਀Goddess religion, based on the trial records of the period.  Forഀ਀the purposes of my story, I postulate that the witches learnedഀ਀the worship of the Forest Lord and the White Lady from theഀ਀(fictional) Shining Ones in remote antiquity, and also that byഀ਀the 17th century retain only a garbled legend of the Shining Onesഀ਀as fearsome beings with awesome powers to heal or kill.

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In reality, of course, there never was a lost race ofഀ਀ancient Celts inhabiting the remote hills of Westernഀ਀Ireland . . . or was there?

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